Example Outline 6a
Outline 2
- Introduction
- Attention-Getter: Teenagers, handicapped, the poor. These are some of the women that are suffering because they of pregnancy but can’t have abortion.
- Thesis statement: Many countries like America are legalizing abortion, but there is still a number of developing countries like Africa that have too restrictive laws for abortion which triggers protesting for the rights of abortion in those countries.
- Content: The three main reasons to legalize abortion is to respect the mothers future, prevent crimes that could occur from the mother or the child, and to decrease the unsafe abortion rate.
- Transition: While movements like the ‘Black Wednesday’ is happening all over the world, there are still countries that illegalize abortion, which makes women give up important events in her life.
- Body
- First main point: Not allowing abortion hinders the mother’s choices of her future.
- Subpoint: There are many regulations when allowing abortion which increases the rate of unsafe abortion.
- Sub-subpoint: There are several negative consequences after abortion like hemorrhage, infection, and poisoning from substances. (Grimes and 6 other, 2006)
- Sub-subpoint: Poland, which is one of the countries that has the most restrictive law make women lay dead babies which provoked a protest from the women. (Sieradzka, 2017)
- Subpoint: Teenagers sometimes drop their education for several reasons like to support finance and because of the people’s attention.
- Sub-subpoint: In many developing countries, the families make the girls marry early which makes a lot of them get pregnant at a young age. However, the people around her does not support her and gives her shame instead. (Chandra-Mouli, Camacho, Michaud, 2013)
- Sub-subpoint: There are projects for educating pregnant teenagers but some teenagers that have morning pains that makes it hard for them to go to these programs which makes it hard to follow the others. (SmithBattle, 2007)
- Transition into second main point: These regulations in her life can lead to negative decisions later on.
- Second main point: Abortion prevents the crimes that could occur after the birth of the unwanted child.
- Subpoint: The rate of clinics or nonhospital facilities that provide abortion is decreasing due to harassment, leading to less abortion providers.
- Sub-subpoint: A research said that 95% of the midway states in America experienced at least one type of harassment. (Jerman, 2014)
- Subpoint: The mother can do crimes which hurts the child or that can make him/her into an orphan.
- Sub-subpoint: The women that cannot take the pressure suicides, do drugs or take pills that kills them, or abandon the baby on the streets or foster homes.
- Subpoint: The child may become a bully or get bullied in school due to insufficient amount of care and love insecure and turn into a criminal later in society.
- Sub-subpoint: Some children that get abandoned from their parents find inappropriate ways to survive which makes them do bad things like stealing and hurting people.
- Transition into third main point: While some countries that recognize the seriousness of this and legalize abortion, there are still people in those countries that argue about this.
- Third main point(Argument & Counterargument)
Argument: Some say that legalizing abortion will decrease the human’s life value which will lead to reckless abortion.
Counter-argument:
- Subpoint: Laws like mandatory sex education or making them take at least a few weeks to consider abortion can prevent this from happening.
- Sub-subpoint: Examples of sex education and the decrease rate of reckless pregnancy.
- Subpoint: Allowing abortion decreases the unsafe abortion rate, thus the overall abortion rate.
- Sub-subpoint: Many developing countries have a high abortion rate in contrast to the developed countries and this means that if the developing countries legalize abortion, the overall abortion rate can be deceased.
- Transition into conclusion: More women will be protected when abortion becomes legalized.
- Conclusion
- Summary: Abortion should be legalized to make laws that are better for the women who are pregnant and for the society.
- Clincher: The question to discuss is if all the pregnant women have to suffer from this pain.
- Sources Cited or Bibliography
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